Dusk Sapphire RE-done

Name: Dusk Sapphire
Age: 16 Born Feb 11.
Gender: Male
Symbol: A Dark Red Sapphire with black flames coming out on either side of it.
Occupation: Student
Appearance: He's 6 feet tall, with black hair and black eyes. He is a cat faunus, but hides it to avoid discrimination and hatred from people that hate fanuses. He hides it by wearing a hoodie to cover his cat ears, yellow shades to cover his eyes, and black jeans. On his jeans, there are dark red lighting blots on either side going up to his hip, and a trim of dark red fire around the ankles. The shirt he wears under the hoodie is black with his symbol on it and dark red trim that look like fire on the sleeves and on the neck line.
History: He was a fanus in a small town to the east of Vale. His mother died when he was 2 due to violent humans. As a child, he was constantly discriminated by the younger and older bullies. As a result, his father, who worked for the White Fang taught him how to fight to protect himself and other fanuses. After the White Fang became violent, he ran away from home, hating his father for being in that group. He ran to Vale and hid, becoming a very strong fighter by training at Signal Academy who took him in as part of an orphan program they were running with a local orphanage. He then applied to beacon and got accepted.
Personality: He is very quiet and lonely. He loves books as well. He will force you away t first, but if you can get to him in a way in which you can talk to him, he will become your friend. If you make him mad, he will hate you for a longtime. If you get on his good side, he will be a loyal and devoted friend. He can be rude and mean, although he tries not to be. He has a quick temper and will defend his friends if they get hurt. Possibly has depression and anger issues.
strength : Cool and calm and logically often. Has creative ways to solve problems. Fairly strong, not buff but not weak. intelligent and caring for his friends. Better with ranger weapon than melee
Weakness : When he's mad he goes into a full out berserker rage. Natural distrust for humans. Not good social skills. Better with ranged weapon that melee. Has extreme trust issues
Semblance: Semblance is shadow. His aura is dark than pitch black night. Shadow lets his shadow travel, if he's in the shadows he can travel to another shadow connected to the shadow he's standing in. He can only go in the shadows of objects, moving people require more aura to go travel into. His aura can be disguised easily so that nobody else know where he is by looking for his aura unless they are trained to look for auras or are specifically looking for him. If its a general search, they would skim over him. Shadow also means that he really doesn't like standing in the sun because it hurts his eyes. Anybody with a light aura has an advantage over him. This also means that his regular night vision for being a faunus is increased so that he has basically binocular vision at night.

Weapons
Names: The left one is named Death while the right one is named Fire.
description : 2 Persian scimitars that he stores in sheathes strapped onto his back. The sheathes can also act as some protection if he is hit on the back. They look exactly the same except for a few small details. Fire has a dragon running up each side of the blade with fire crystals as eyes for each dragon. Thus, It can launch fir from the tip or light itself on fire if the situation requires it. Death has skulls running up on each side, with black crystals for eyes in each one. The crystals can absorb any energy or life based attacks anybody launches at him.
Secondary Form:he blades can be moved out of the way and automatic barrels will pop out of each. Fire's bullets will light the enemy on fire while Death's bullet's will make the enemy exhausted and tired. Basically used for weakening his opponent before shooting them with his Fire gun.
Tertiary Form: The entire top can be disconnected to form two deadly nun chucks where he can chop the enemy to shreds.
History: They were made in the mountains off to the east of Vale. His father bought them from a man who was traveling around, selling items he picked up in his travels, and gave them to his son as a present and to help him defend himself. Dusk then gave them their names, and caries them today as a memory of the horrible past he once had (Death) and the bright future he hopes to have at Beacon (Fire)

Sorry for the wait.

Your semblance sounds extremely powerful during the nighttime. Maybe it could only apply to shadows applied by objects and not the planet? Also, someone skilled in detecting aura could still pick it up. You can't be totally invisible with no weaknesses, sorry. Maybe say that its difficult to do such a thing, or that it doesn't give an exact position? Something like that perhaps.

Could you detail how your weapons hide in the sleeves of your hoodie? A full size sword in a sleeve is pretty much never hidden. This profile is written by you, the player, not the character, so you need to detail your weapon history. If you don't want to give specifics, just say it was forged for a specific reason/character, and how your character obtained it, or whatever you need to describe.

Okay I'll fix it right now

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