Darian Dusk

CHARACTER

Name:Darian Dusk

Age:17

Gender:Male

Symbol:A Red Moon Rising Over a Black Landscape.

Occupation:Student

Appearance:With a Height of 175 Centimeters and a Weight of 200 lbs, Darian is an extremely Strong Person. He Wears a Red and Dark Grey Trench Coat with a Black Silk Inlay. He Wears Grey Jeans and a Light Grey Undershirt. His Hair is Black with Crimson Streaks that is Roughly 3 Centimeters in Length Down to the Ears and The Back of his Neck with 2 Centimeter Hair Going Down to His Brow.

History:From a Very Young Age, Darian was subjected to Physical Abuse by His Father. His Father suffered From Anger Management Issues as a result Of Darian’s Mother Leaving Him and His Father, Resulting in Darian’s Abuse. After Being Humiliated at School Because of the Bruises That Darian Received. He Began To Fight Back, So Darian Trained and Trained Until He Was Strong Enough to Stand Up Against His Father, but Perhaps He Became Too Strong. After a Long Battle between Darian and His Father, Darian Was Victorious, But He Didn’t Stop, Darian Kept Punching and Punching Until, With one Final Swing of his Mighty Fist and one Final Cry of Rage, Darian Punched His Father in the Chest, Stopping His Heart. Darian Realized what he Had Just Done, and He Laughed. Darian Showed No Care For His Father, In Fact, He Was Happy That His Father Was Dead. Darian Then Passed out After the Extra Adrenaline wore off, and when He Awoke, He Had No Recollection of What had Happened Just Hours Before. Darian Now Lives a Normal Life, He Has Graduated from Signal and will be Enrolling at Beacon.

Personality:Darian Is A Very Serious Person That Doesn’t Really Like to Joke Around. This Is Best Seen While He is in battle, He will Never Talk or Get Side Tracked Whilst He is Fighting, He Clears His Mind and Unleashes His Inner and Outer Strength. Darian Is also Very Anti-Social and Doesn't Talk Much To Other People Unless he is Giving out Orders.

Strength:Large and extremely Strong both mentally and physically. A real Heavy Hitter with a Quick and Strong mind

Weakness:His Movements are Slow and He is Extremely Stubborn. He Also Doesn’t Like Working With Others, but He will if He Has To.

Semblance:Berzerk Rage: Darian kept one Thing from his Father, His Anger Issues. Darian’s Aura will Begin to Glow Every Time He Hits a Target, His Aura Glows Brighter and Brighter Until it is Fully Charged. When His Aura is Fully Charged, He uses it as an Extra Burst of Energy to Super Charge His Attacks for Around Ten Minutes. Darian will normally use Berzerk Rage as Either a Last Ditch Effort Or to Give Him a Fighting Chance Against a Powerful Enemy. During the Time That Berzerk Rage Is Active, His Attacks are A lot More Powerful and He is A lot Faster, But He is Blinded by Rage, and Has Difficulty Telling Friend from Enemy While he is in This Particular State, This is why He Doesn’t like Working with Others. Using his Semblance Drains His Strength quickly and if he uses it for Too Long, He will Pass out.

WEAPON

Name:Pain and Agony

Primary Form:Black and Red Painted Iron Gauntlets, one for each hand. [Pain is the for the Left Hand and Agony is for the Right].

Secondary Form:Assault Rifle Gauntlets[Barrels Extend From Slots Above the Knuckles of the Index and Pinky Finger].

Tertiary Form:N/A

History:Pain and Agony Were Originally Darian’s Training Gloves When He Taught Himself How to Box. He found them in His old House and Remade them into the Iron Gauntlets That They Currently are.

Note: I do realize that I spelt Berserk wrong, I did it on purpose.

Seems a tad short, maybe some more detail in his personality. Your bbcode is also off.

I added to his Personality a little, he doesn't really have a very detailed personality in the first place, so its difficult to expand on something that isn't very large anyway.

I can live with that. +1

Approved.

In the future, please try to refrain from capitalizing so many letters. You only need to capitalize proper nouns and the first word in a sentence generally. Its minor, but bothersome to read through.