Hiawatha Nightingale

Character
Name: Hiawatha Nightingale
Age: 16, Birthay being November 13(friday the 13th)
Gender: Male
Symbol:
Appearance:
    - Rather tall (183cm)
     - Light brown skinned (indian)
     - Ridiculously thin (54kg)
     - Silver haired with random streaks of Green,Cyan and Magenta
     - Orange left eye, Green right eye
     - Scar shaped like eye on left palm
    - Typically wears a trench coat over a blue bulletproof vest. He also wears Jeans and fingerless gloves.
Personality: Tends to get obsessive on a single goal. Willing to sacrifice himself to fulfill his objective. Enjoys pain, making him reckless. Calculative and silver-tongued, he has no solid personality.
History: Born as the bastard son of a pirate, Hiawatha was sold to a lone scientist, Gerald, as a slave. He was used as a test subject for his illegal research. A failed experiment turned his hair to its random colour and also turned Gerald mad. He got convinced of a massive conspiracy and thus carved an eye into Hiawatha's palm. He eventually disappeared without a trace. The only clue Hiawatha found was a black dust crystal that did nothing. Hence, Hiawatha became obsessed with finding him. In an attempt to find weapons, he broke into Signal's forge. He was caught but was pitied and allowed to study at signal.
Strength: He is good at manipulating people and has a good mind for being tactics. He also is adept at being stealthy. He is extremely good at manipulating Aura but has little Aura.
Weakness: He is physically weak and has a muscle disorder. Also has a tendency to overestimate how much he can afford to lose.
Weapon
Name: Logic and Reasonable Discourse (Gauntlets)
Primary Form: Gauntlets with retractable metal wires. The wires are controlled by Aura. They are immensely strong and can even be used to carry Hiawatha. They can be used to scratch people and constrict movement. Each Gauntlet has 5 wires(6 metres)
Secondary Function/Form: Hiawatha can even send electrical shocks through the wires. He can then use that to electrocute people and even control them by attaching the wire to their spinal cord to mimicking nervous signals. When controlling someone, Hiawatha is completely vulnerable(immobile). He is also utterly exhausted after using this function. It also is extremely hard for Hiawatha to attach the wires to the victim's spinal cord while the person is still active.
History: Hiawatha found blueprints detailing the nervous system from Gerald's lab. He thus created the Gauntlets in Signal's Forge. The sub-weapon was also forged at signal.
SubWeapon: A simple backhanded sword for practical use. The sword has the black dust crystal as its pommel.

Eye Tattoo on left palm instead of eye tattoo and left palm. Though from the history it sounds like it is more a scar instead of a tattoo.
What is his hair length?

And there is concern about the second function of your weapon. It can easily become over powered and godmod due to the control function.
Hiawatha had a horrible father.

Would it make less OP if it left Hiawatha completely and utterly powerless while controlling a person?

Hiawatha in unable to move while controlling a person? That would work. Add it in.

Edited. Any further problems?

nope.

Approved.