Alaska Smith

Character


NAME: Alaska Anne Smith
RACE: Human
AGE: 18


Appearance/Other

GENDER: Female
HAIR COLOR/TYPE: Dark purple hair and medium length
EYE COLOR: Blue
HEIGHT: 5'8
WEIGHT: 119lb
SYMBOL: A bird flying. As long as the bird is still flying, life still continues. - Flying Bird Symbol
ACADEMY: Beacon
CLOTHING/ARMOR Wears jeans and a thin long-sleeve purple shirt.
SEMBLANCE: Light telekinesis, She can only use it on objects weighing no more than 5lbs (probably even less). She mainly uses it for her throwing knifes. She can use this aura twice a day and each time it lasts for 2 minutes, due to the strain it causes to her mind (migraines, headaches, etc.)
OCCUPATION: Student and works at local coffee shop.
Picture of Alaska: She doesn't have an eye patch though, her vision is fine and has blue eyes instead of purple.Alaska


Personality:

Alaska always did things on her own. She never liked having a friend beside her or even someone to help her work. Shes very stubborn and isn't interested in guys. Shes straight but has no interest in relationships. She isn't afraid to kill anyone and will do what she has to do to survive. During High School, Alaska was shy around everyone and would ignore the fights. She defended herself once and got suspended for 2 days. This other girl called her a dirty name and ended up punching her and breaking her nose. Alaska wasn't a girl that didn't do anything if she got bullied, that person would pay for it.

Strengths:
+short range attack with Katana
+melee skills
+Very quick in combat and is fast enough to flee from an enemy
+Has great accuracy and precision throwing her knifes and shooting her shotgun
+Makes smart decisions during combat and doesn't panic when she's in a tough situation
+Has no fear in fighting

Weaknesses:
-very light armor, just clothes and some boots
-would rather fight alone because she doesn't trust anyone
-long range attack
-no experience in working with people
-fear of the dark
-Flashbacks of her past blacks her out at times

History:

Alaska Anne Smith was born in the town of Vale. Her mother made clothing and sold it at the local market. Her father owned the local gun shop and was even known to make his weapons. Alaska's life was great. She helped her mother at home with cooking and cleaning. She was the only child but loved her parents. Life was great until one disastrous night. Her parents were both murdered in front of her at the age of 11. A robber came in their house throughout the night and tried to steal any valuables they had. Alaska woke up and heard the mans steps. She screamed until her father came running into the hallway and got shot three times in the chest. Alaska was in the hallway in a corner crying. Her mother once told her that there was a gun in the cabinet if someone ever broke in. Alaska was right by the cabinet. Her mother came walking out of the room because she had woken up to the gunshots. She had no idea what was going on. By the time she had noticed her dead husband laying on the ground, the robber had shot her until she was on the ground in a pool of blood. The robber turned around to Alaska and was instantly shot. She had found the gun inside the closet and killed the man. She didn't hesitate to pull the trigger and killed him. The cops arrived and cleaned up the mess. Alaska moved into her Aunts house a few houses down. Ever since then, she never trusted a soul. Her father left a note inside of his gun shop. The note told her how much he loved her and that there was a special weapon he made under the bed in the shop. It was specialized for her and was made out of steel. At the age of 15, she took the weapon and found out that it had a transformation. It was a shotgun and a Katana. She had heard about the Beacon Academy and trained every day. She had perfected melee skills and had great accuracy with her shotgun. She needed another weapon just in case. A weapon that no one would expect. She thought of the idea at 16 years old and started to make these metal blades.They looked like throwing knives but were made out of steel. She could hide them in her boots, pockets, and even sleeves. At the age of 18, Alaska asked her Aunt to go to Beacon. She loved fighting and thought it would make her forget about her past. She wanted to move on and thought this was the only way out. She went to Beacon and was accepted.


Weapons:

MAIN: "The Persuader" is Alaska's automatic shotgun and katana. She named it "The Persuader" because the weapon will persuade people to realize that shes the victor.

WEAPON HISTORY:This weapon was made by her father before he died. He created weapons and sold them. This weapon is made out of steel. It's pretty simple but the bottom of the gun turns into a very sharp blade. It was made by her father. He created weapons and sold them but it took him 2 years to make this one. He always wanted her to be protected and when she was old enough, he was going to train her. Unfortunately, he was killed and Alaska had to train by herself. The weapon is made of all steel with "The Persuader" engraved at the base of the gun. The secondary form shoots out a sharp blade that does a lot of damage. The shotgun holds 10 shots per clips and has a pretty high rate of fire. The clip is at the top of the gun.
"The Persuader"- http://25.media.tumblr.com/d8c3cdb0e3af1242a37b839fc48fbe96/tumblr_mjou65lurb1rd00hmo3_500.jpg

SECONDARY: Alaska has made these metal throwing knives that she can throw from a medium/long range distance. They do a decent amount of damage.

WEAPON HISTORY:She hand made all of these. She learned how to make them at the age of 16 and threw them at targets. It's a perfect weapon to kill someone/something with a surprise. Alaska has killed only animals with them, even a deer. She threw the knife perfectly at its heart. She followed the trail and found the dead deer with the knife sticking inside of its chest. - Steel Throwing Knives

Well, every section but the history is too short. You seem to be missing the semblance and appearance sections as well. I'm not very fond of listed appearances, but if you add more detail you can get away with it. Likewise, you're missing the weapon history sections, so spilt that part out of the forms and give it its own section.

The strengths and weaknesses need detail added in just to be more specific, otherwise I have no way of gauging the overall strength of your character.

Personal oppinion, but throwing knifes made of rock just seem ineffeciant and ineffective, why not metal? They would be stronger, lighter, and work better.

Edited .

I'm going to give the semblance a no. You are not allowed to control other characters in any way whatsoever. As for the rest of the profile, you are fine.

Edited again. Sorry about that haha.

Approved +1!

I know you mention not being able to use her semblance for very long, but I think I would prefer an actual length of time or number of uses.

Edited.

I can live with this. 2/2 and moved.