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Oziel

Oziel


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Join date : 2013-11-19
Age : 29
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PostSubject: Oziel Aed   Oziel Aed Icon_minitimeTue Nov 19, 2013 8:19 pm

CHARACTER

Name: Oziel Aed

Age: 19

Gender: Male

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Occupation: Student

Appearance:
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Powdered black hair that covers the sides of his face and part of his forehead. His eyes resemble worn emeralds that have been washed out of their color by water. His skin is the tone of a light olive and his stands approximately 5’9” weighing nearly 150lbs.He wears a long sleeve jacket that meets his abdominal half way, and the of tk is a dark shade of tan. He wears black-belted suspenders that crisscross at his waist and reach up over his shoulders and straight down his back. The suspenders are not only holding on to his tan cargo pants but they are also holding on to a black cloth that perfectly wraps around his body as a fashion sense. Underneath the jacket and suspenders is a light brown shirt with a white rimmed color and a necklace representing the cross.

History:
As a boy Oziel group up with just one sister, no other siblings, they would do everything together, they even dreamt together, however one day when his sister went out to get groceries, at the time they were 14, there was a biking accident and the biker had rammed into Oziel’s sister head on giving her a concussion that later led to internal bleeding and death. Ever since that day Oziel and his family have never been the same. Oziel grew quieter, his once outspoken, rambunctious personality died the moment his sister died. His mom and dad wanted to move out of the area because the memory of his sister still lived on and hurt them ever so, however Oziel did not want to move. He still felt as if he had to live both him and his sisters dream together as if she were still alive which he did.

Explaining why his family should still stay was the easy part, the hard part was that he didn’t have any skill or experience in him and his sisters dream which was attending Beacon. Around the time when he Oziel had turned 15 his Dad got him a Pair of tonfas both with the Initial “O” for Oziel and “A” for Aliza, his sister.

They were known as the Ocular’s and have been in Oziel’s family for many generations. They were a unique instrument and were hardly ever seen because of their rarity. For four long years Oziel and his Father trained day and night trying to perfect the weapon, they even tinkered with it a bit, well his dad tinkered with it adding metal balls and metal threads to it and also making the weapon not only a dual wield but a single wield if the ends were connected.

Oziel trained and he trained and he was finally skilled in weapon combat, with his own weapon, however the grudge and heartache of his sister lived one, his voice was stripped from him only because he had nothing to say anymore.
He had received good news however later one when he had found out that he was accepted in Beacon, his heart fluttered, and in his mind he was saying to himself that there is hope for rejuvenation, hopefully he isn’t too late for it.

Personality:He is a reserved type of person. Will always remain quiet even when spoken to. Many mistake his attitude as him being rude when really that’s not it at all. He has always been quiet. Despite all that he is a kind hearted person with a heart of gold and a soul of silver. He never gets mad he really only has three expressions he will almost always reveal, confusion, joy, and sorrow, other than that he is a rather straight forward person; nothing more nothing less.

Strength: Oziel is very acrobatic and somewhat quick on his feet, he can do flips, and twirls that help aid him in battle sometimes. He is also a great combatant when it comes to fighting with his weapons, in a way he is resourceful to himself.

Weakness: One weakness of his is that since he hardly ever speaks his teamwork skills are terrible, he will almost always fly solo whenever entering a fight, challenge, war or battle. He doesn’t have much to do against opponents who are armed with firearms and what not, all he can do his run and hope he doesn’t get shot. He also keeps people at a distance which makes it hard for him to trust anyone or make any friends whatsoever.

Semblance:Oziel’s semblance is that over time when a fight or dire situation gets out of hand, (whether he is in a tight situation or meeting his ends) his reflexes increase causing him to react faster making it harder, but not impossible to hit him. he can dodge attacks easily, but only if they are non-firearm weapons. if he is hit during this time where his reflexes are increased he loses the upper hand a grows rather slow and worn out.

WEAPON

Name:Oculus


Primary Form: In its primary form, Oculus is a dual wielded weapon of two Tonfas that are bladed at the ends where a person would normally strike another one with. The blades are silver and the body of the tonfa is blue. They are a foot and a half long and the blade adds an extra 3¾ inches to the weapon. Near the base of Oculus where the blade sticks out are 6 tiny metal balls that and a trigger is pushed out on the handle of the weapon the balls shoot out and attached to them are metal threads. These threads are used to tie up enemies or swing from tree branches and other things regarding that matter.


Secondary Form: Both no bladed ends of the tonfa can be connected together and the handles can be slid together to create a giant connected tonfa weapon. The triggers to shoot the balls/threads still function the same only this time they are slightly fast and can cause wounds to the skin but not anything fatal. The blades when both ends of the tonfa are connected also increase Two inches in size because they are slightly being pushed out to be more useful in battle.

History:The Oculus has been passed down to the first born of each family whenever they turn 15, it has been a tradition for many years and was originally hand crafted by Oziel’s great-great-great grandfather.


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PostSubject: Re: Oziel Aed   Oziel Aed Icon_minitimeThu Nov 21, 2013 2:29 am

Approved 1/2

I will comment on just one thing. Your weight is 135 pounds. At 5'9", you'd be a fair bit underweight. Considering your character is melee oriented, perhaps raise it just a bit? 150 or so would be good if you want to be lighter still. Entirely up to you of course, as it really doesn't affect anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Oziel Aed   Oziel Aed Icon_minitimeThu Nov 21, 2013 2:31 am

Hahaha I see what you mean..i wasn't really good with number ratios lol
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PostSubject: Re: Oziel Aed   Oziel Aed Icon_minitimeThu Nov 21, 2013 2:51 am

Approved 2/2
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