Zina Solomon

CHARACTER

Name: Zina Solomon

Age: 18, The eighth day of the third month

Gender: Female

Appearance: 5'4". Long Straight B;ack, Waist length. Green Hooded Robe, left Open. Green and White Corset with Baggy Green Pants. Birthmark over right eye, mainly black accents.

Personality: Curious and new to most civilized world, Zina finds enjoyment in discovering new things. Many things seem alien to her and she often does not follow social norms.

History: Zima lived most of her life in the Forest of Forever Fall. She has trained herself to be an avid hunter (in the sense she hunts for her food) , surviving against the Grimm. What little interaction she has previously found was that of many faunus who worked in dust mines near her usual hunting grounds. She found the faunus to be quite exciting people with a unique culture. She developed a symbiotic relationship with many faunus, and even members of White Fang. Steering clear of most civilization, she also likes to interact with Beacon students who find themselves in the forest due to their class assignments. Unfortunately, she likes to "play" with them, which leads to altercations between her and students at beacon who think she is trying to attack them.

Strength: Being a skilled hunter (in the sense that she hunts her food), she is quick and precise in her attacks. She is incredibly fast and can often catch opponents off guard with her attacks. She uses her speed to make up for the lack of durability she has due to her weak aura.

Weakness: Due to her lack of interaction with many humans, she does not understand social norms, or even the concept of lying. She is often taken advantage of, and can be incredibly naive. She often attacks without much thought against enemies, and can be easily fooled or tricked in battle, especially when the enemy uses any form of illusion or distraction. She often lets her emotions get the better of her and does not anticipate her opponents moves. She also sacrifices the power of her hits for speed and precision, often not hitting her enemy as hard. She also has not been trained in using her aura, making her less durable.

WEAPON

Name:
Waidsmann Heil
Primary Form:
Bow and Arrow form, made for accurate long distance attacks. Her bow is wooden and made from the trees in Forever Fall, as with her arrows. She uses Grimm bones for the arrowheads. Her bow is also covered in Grimm bone spikes, that are incredibly sharp, making it a good weapon to ward of an enemy quickly.
Secondary Form/Function: The bow itself shifts and becomes a wooden chainsaw gauntlet. Through a movement of her fingers pulling strings inside the gauntlet, she can spin the Grimm bone spikes in order to create a chainsaw effect.

History: Zima created the weapon after several attempts to make her bow more deadly against Grimm oponnents. She found herself running away from fights until she perfected her weapon and stopped running. Spending her whole life in the forest, she didn't have much else to do than improve her weapon.

I'd like to see you expand a little more on strengths and weaknesses. The strengths are passable at the moment, but being naive may not come in to combat all that often.

Thank you for the feedback! I have edited the strengths and weaknesses, I hope this what you had in mind!

Much better. Approved by me.

Hmm, This character sounds very interesting.

Approved.