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PostSubject: Riven Crowley   Riven Crowley Icon_minitimeThu Sep 12, 2013 1:46 am

CHARACTER

Name: Riven Crowley

Age: 20 DOB may 25

Gender: male

Symbol: none

Appearance: 6'0" 200lbs, 2 steel hoop earrings on each ear, average build, shaved head, wears a set of purple and black leather padded armor.

Personality: Very silent, not because he is recluseive or anti social, but because he is constantly thinking, Loves games of strategy. He is very uncomfortable in large groups and other situations where he cannot predict actions or outcomes.

History: Riven was raised in a family of scholars. each member of his family had a special area of study that they liked to dabble in, Riven's being aura and dust interaction. He enjoyed making objects with dust move by activating the dust similar to how a puppeteer would manipulate a marionette. at age 16 he developed a set of armor that he can manipulate as if it was his own body, and was able to use it to make him stronger and faster while he was inside. He used his creation as a final project to graduate from Citadel Academy, the academy where his family has taught and attended for 5 generations. He is attending beacon because he strives to become a master strategist and perfect his art of manipulation.

Strength: Very analytical, can lead with great confidence. He can assess a situation and make logically sound decisions. (What is your character's strength?)

Weakness: He is vulnerable when he is remotely controlling his armor, for he is not very fast or strong for that matter. While he can make great decisions based on logic, he struggles with issues of morality and emotion, making him sometimes emotionally distant from his peers.

WEAPON

Name: Marionette

Primary Form: The Marionette is a suit of heavy plate armor that is controlled by Riven's arua using conduits created by dust, these conduits are very similar to nerves, or strings on a marionette. This armor amplifies Riven's strength by 5x allowing him to move at a medium , but steady pace. The armor is also equipped with a lance and a heavy shield, neither of which are very special aside from their size and weight. While the armor amplifies strength it does come at a price to the user in that it does feel pain, because Riven is connected to the armor, Riven also feels what the armor feels. (Note: Riven only feels the pain, if a piece of armor breaks, say the arm, Riven's arm does not break, but he does feel a equivalent pain, in the same location, also the conduits that are damaged would also prevent that appendage from moving.)  

Secondary Form/Function: The Marionette can be remotely operated by riven by a distance of 250 yards, Riven must be able to maintain visual contact with the armor or at least have a mental map of the area in his head to direct it to a location, without visual contact it cannot fight effectively, for it would be akin to fighting with a blindfold on. best uses for this would be for a diversion, as a scout, and as a rescue vehicle. While being remotely operated though Riven is fairly exposed.

History: Marionette was at first an experiment by Riven at age 15 to see how intricately he could manipulate objects remotely. After about a year of tinkering and practice he was able to move the armor like he was able to move his body, and use it to make him stronger. Impressed with this accomplishment, He used it as a means to attend beacon in order to further perfect his tactical and combative knowledge.


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PostSubject: Re: Riven Crowley   Riven Crowley Icon_minitimeThu Sep 12, 2013 2:48 am

Riven. Great name!

I cannot approve your character yet. The suit of armor you have created is very cool, but sounds incredably powerful. Especially when you describe that it increases your physical strength greatly, along with an increase in your speed. It sounds like it has few, or no weaknesses. Could we perhaps change some things around to give it a weakness, or make it sound less powerful?

The second form of your armor sounds very cool and I like that, however.
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PostSubject: Re: Riven Crowley   Riven Crowley Icon_minitimeThu Sep 12, 2013 3:04 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Riven Crowley   Riven Crowley Icon_minitimeThu Sep 12, 2013 3:07 am

Approved! Make sure you keep that pain transmission thing in mind while roleplaying!
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