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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:43 pm | |
| CHARACTER Name: Kaitlin Seraphiya Age: 18 (January 7th) Gender: Female Symbol: - Spoiler:
Appearance: She is 5,8 and 114lbs. She has long lilac hair that is curly and goes down to her chest/mid-back. She has a average bust and isn't very muscular. She wears a white tanktop with a black leather jacket on top and black ripped skinny jeans. She has a tiara in her hair. She also wears a pair of black low-cut boots. Her cat faunus ears and faunus tail is showing. She has a subtle smirk usually on her face. Her eyes look threatening if she is mad. - Spoiler:
Personality: Kaitlin is a very spunky individual. She is very energetic and enjoys fighting. She enjoys lightening up moods with humor or just trying to cheer people up when they are down. She is a very smart and intellectual person but her being loud doesn't help. She usually will protect her friends like they are family and will always try to make sure someone who's fighting with her get hurt. Sometimes, Kaitlin can act very sadistic and will be very cold to anyone she talks to. She usually does this when she is mad and really ticked off at someone. History: Kaitlin was the daughter of a owner of a rich company and a faunus mother. At first, her life was what she described as perfect. Her parents always spent time with her and they were a happy family. Until her father started to act differently. He spent time gambling, drinking, and smoking and never with Kaitlin. He started to beat Kaitlin's mother, regretting marrying her while beating her. Kaitlin's mother didn't want Kaitlin to see this so she told her to run away. Kaitlin's father tried to stop her but in the end got away. She brought enough money to buy what she needed and still enroll into Signal where she made her first weapon and later got accepted into Beacon. Strength: Fighting, Strategics, Technique, Durability, and Aura. Weakness: Talking during encounters, taking things head on by herself, and getting extremely mad if someone doesn't do things the way her plan was prepped. Semblance: Runes - Runes are a quicker way of travel for Kaitlin or being able to shield herself with a large rune. She can only make 4 at a time but they can be quite large. If the rune gets broken, it'll put a lot of strain on her durability. She usually only use runes for travel and they can travel as fast as a Olympic sprinter but they will not last as long if they go at full speed and not for shields unless she really has to do so to protect herself or allies. Runes appear as a circle with a outer ring full of characters of a language and it has a large star in the centre of it. WEAPON Name: Purgatory Burster Primary Form: It is a black shotgun with a blade that has dust containers inside it. The blade looks like it's exerting dark aura and it is under muzzle of the shotgun. It also functions as a shotgun using bullets with Dust energy in which the bullets are infused with whatever elemental Dust is in it making them more deadly. Secondary Form/Function: A black spear with oriental designs. It shoots when the body of the spear is twisted. The blade is even more deadly in this form. It shoots from the butt of the spear when twisted in this form. History: It was created at Signal and Kaitlin says she used flames from hell to forge it to make it a deadly weapon. The dark aura from the blade, Kaitlin says it's like that because she used a dark metal and the flames from hell she forged with gave it a aura. (Not aura as in soul just like energy basically.)The metal Kaitlin used to make the blade was just a dark average looking metal. When she forged into the spearhead it was perfect but when she cooled it in water, it was still blazing hot. She noticed that over the years, she found out it was still very hot because the metal absorbed all the heat from the furnace. So now the blade, since it's black, it looks like its giving off a aura while it is actually giving off heat with the reflection of the black metal on it, thus giving it a dark 'aura'.
Last edited by DatteSa on Sun May 11, 2014 7:18 pm; edited 17 times in total | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:50 pm | |
| Neat post, but what exactly is a Grimm crystal and Grimm Bullets? If you could go into a bit more depth about what they are, that would be wonderful. Also, your weapon description is a bit vague about the blade and dust containers. Is it like a bayonet? Does it turn into a sword? Where are the containers? What do they do? Also, depending on what the Grimm crystals and bullets are, you may have to change them due to it not being exactly cannon. Just a heads up. | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:00 pm | |
| About Grimm Crystals they are made up of various dust crystals (energy, fire, light, etc.) mixed with Grimm Essences (obtained when defeating a very powerful Grimm Monster.) She accidently fused them together and it affected the crystals ability (darkness now) and her personality. Grimm Bullets are created inside Purgatory Buster. The containers (inside the spear, loaded with Grimm Crystals) put some of the Grimm Crystals energy into regular bullets. This makes the bullet more deadly and able to go through solid objects.
About the weapon, it is a classic spear but the blade is infused with dust from the Grimm Crystals which gives it the same effects as Grimm Bullets (through solid objects yada yada yada) and the spear is quite thick so the containers with the Grimm Crystals are inside the spear and can be ejected to be loaded with fresh ones. The bullets go through the blunt side so she can attack using both sides of her weapon. | |
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Navolas2 Site Owner
Posts : 617 Join date : 2013-08-26 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:16 pm | |
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- This makes the bullet more deadly and able to go through solid objects.
no. While I do like your profile and the Grimm Crystals you have come up with, you cannot have a weapon of any sort that goes through solid objects. So you will need to change that. You can keep the grimm crystals and the grimm crystal energy but they can't go through solid objects, I'm sorry. You can come up with something else they can do however. Also it would be the butt of the spear, not the blunt side. Also the changes need to be added into the original template, not just commented to us. | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:22 pm | |
| Hey you! Don't go stealing my profile reviews! | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:24 pm | |
| Done and edited! Hope it is fine now since the blade is just deadlier along with the uber-nerfed Grimm Bullets lol | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:37 pm | |
| Once again, could you describe where the blade is on the gun? Is it a bayonet or does it stick straight up? Other than that it's good to go! | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:41 pm | |
| I just felt so dumb when you said to me where is it on the gun i thought you meant on the spear i was like "Durrr its on the end of the spear durrr duhhh" | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:01 pm | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:19 pm | |
| Sorry, we aren't accepting "crystal infused with darkness" either. Sorry if it seems like I'm being a bit strict. | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Fri Sep 13, 2013 10:25 pm | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Sun Sep 15, 2013 8:22 am | |
| One more thing another mod asked me to clarify: can you give a bit more detail as to what the "dark aura" coming out of the blade is? How can it affect the weapon in combat? | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Sun Sep 15, 2013 8:35 am | |
| The metal Kaitlyn used to make the blade was just a dark average looking metal. When she forged into the spearhead it was perfect but when she cooled it in water, it was still blazing hot. She noticed that over the years, she found out it was still very hot because the metal absorbed all the heat from the furnace. So now the blade, since it's black, it looks like its giving off a aura while it is actually giving off heat with the reflection of the black metal on it, thus giving it a dark 'aura' | |
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R3dder
Posts : 179 Join date : 2013-09-05
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Sun Sep 15, 2013 8:44 am | |
| Accepted! Sorry for all the trouble. | |
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Amber Moderator
Posts : 1680 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Sat Nov 02, 2013 5:03 pm | |
| - Pre-Edit:
CHARACTER Name: Kaitlin Seraphiya Age: 18 (January 7th) Gender: Female Symbol: - Spoiler:
Appearance: She is 5,8 and 114lbs. She has long lilac hair that is curly and goes down to her thigh and in her hair there is a ribbon. She has a average bust and isn't very muscular. She wears a lilac evening dress with a white jacket and has a anklet with her symbol on it. She wears a pair of white flats. She also has gloves with no fingers. - Spoiler:
Personality: She has two personalities: one for social and one when in a battle or encounter. Her social personality is spunky, teasing, and somewhat insane but still cares for her close friend. Her battle personality is serious, determined, and cold and values her team-mates like nakama and makes sure no one gets hurt. History: She born a Faunus under a human father and a Faunus mother. She had to run away since her dad disowned her and her mother told her to run since she was beaten by her father. She was able to get into Beacon because of her amazing technique and her weapon. Strength: Fighting, Strategics, Technique, Durability, and Aura. Weakness: Talking during encounters, taking things head on by herself, and getting extremely mad if someone doesn't do things the way her plan was prepped. WEAPON Name: Purgatory Burster Primary Form: It is a black shotgun with a blade that has dust containers inside it. The blade looks like it's exerting dark aura and it is under muzzle of the shotgun. It also functions as a shotgun using bullets with Dust energy in which the bullets are infused with whatever elemental Dust is in it making them more deadly. Secondary Form/Function: A black spear with oriental designs. It shoots when the body of the spear is twisted. The blade is even more deadly in this form. It shoots from the butt of the spear when twisted in this form. History: It was created at Signal and Kaytlin says she used flames from hell to forge it to make it a deadly weapon. The dark aura from the blade, Kaitlyn says it's like that because she used a dark metal and the flames from hell she forged with gave it a aura. (Not aura as in soul just like energy basically.) The metal Kaitlyn used to make the blade was just a dark average looking metal. When she forged into the spearhead it was perfect but when she cooled it in water, it was still blazing hot. She noticed that over the years, she found out it was still very hot because the metal absorbed all the heat from the furnace. So now the blade, since it's black, it looks like its giving off a aura while it is actually giving off heat with the reflection of the black metal on it, thus giving it a dark 'aura'
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SentientSnake Moderator
Posts : 1055 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 32 Location : Yes.
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Sun Mar 09, 2014 10:56 pm | |
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CHARACTER Name: Kaitlin Seraphiya Age: 18 (January 7th) Gender: Female Symbol: - Spoiler:
Appearance: She is 5,8 and 114lbs. She has long lilac hair that is curly and goes down to her chest/mid-back and in her hair there is a ribbon. She has a average bust and isn't very muscular. She wears a white tanktop and black ripped skinny jeans. She has a tiara in her hair. She also wears a pair of black low-cut boots. Her cat faunus ears and faunus tail is showing. She has a subtle smirk usually on her face. Her eyes look threatening if she is mad. - Spoiler:
Personality: She has two personalities: one for social and one when in a battle or encounter. Her social personality is spunky, teasing, and somewhat insane but still cares for her close friend. Her battle personality is serious, determined, and cold and values her team-mates like nakama and makes sure no one gets hurt. History: She born a Faunus under a human father and a Faunus mother. She had to run away since her dad disowned her and her mother told her to run since she was beaten by her father. She was able to get into Beacon because of her amazing technique and her weapon. Strength: Fighting, Strategics, Technique, Durability, and Aura. Weakness: Talking during encounters, taking things head on by herself, and getting extremely mad if someone doesn't do things the way her plan was prepped. WEAPON Name: Purgatory Burster Primary Form: It is a black shotgun with a blade that has dust containers inside it. The blade looks like it's exerting dark aura and it is under muzzle of the shotgun. It also functions as a shotgun using bullets with Dust energy in which the bullets are infused with whatever elemental Dust is in it making them more deadly. Secondary Form/Function: A black spear with oriental designs. It shoots when the body of the spear is twisted. The blade is even more deadly in this form. It shoots from the butt of the spear when twisted in this form. History: It was created at Signal and Kaytlin says she used flames from hell to forge it to make it a deadly weapon. The dark aura from the blade, Kaitlyn says it's like that because she used a dark metal and the flames from hell she forged with gave it a aura. (Not aura as in soul just like energy basically.) The metal Kaitlyn used to make the blade was just a dark average looking metal. When she forged into the spearhead it was perfect but when she cooled it in water, it was still blazing hot. She noticed that over the years, she found out it was still very hot because the metal absorbed all the heat from the furnace. So now the blade, since it's black, it looks like its giving off a aura while it is actually giving off heat with the reflection of the black metal on it, thus giving it a dark 'aura'
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Mon Mar 10, 2014 6:26 pm | |
| Edited personality, history and added a semblance. | |
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Seiryuu24 Moderator
Posts : 653 Join date : 2013-09-12 Age : 40 Location : Washington
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:28 pm | |
| I think I need a bit more information on how the runes help her travel faster. | |
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DatteSa
Posts : 976 Join date : 2013-09-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kaitlin Seraphiya Tue Apr 29, 2014 8:02 pm | |
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