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Tristar Soo

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Join date : 2014-04-18
Age : 19
Location : US

PostSubject: Ace Rone   Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:04 pm

Name: Ace Rone

Age: 19, month 5, day 25

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Symbol: Just a dark circle

Occupation: Anti hunter (an anti-hunter is like an anti-hero who is close to a hunter but is more of an independent person who does what they want )

Appearance: Wears a dark jacket and has black hair, pants and shirt Height 6'2 Weight- 201 lbs.

History- Ace’s life started in a large polluted city and was raised by a group of thieves that called themselves the Dark Symbols after his parents died in a car crash when going on a date while he was at home, and he learned stealth, martial arts(more specifically Ju Jitsu) and created his weapon with the help of one of the thieves. That was until he met a girl when he was 10. He left the thieves for her and her family took him in until he was 14 and was falsely accused of killing her, when it was actually the thieves who did. He then went to Beacon and when he showed what he could do and filled out the forum they accepted him. After 4 years he graduated at age 18. From then on he stopped crimes with the police and killed monsters but didn't always listen to the higher ups and is still like that to this day.

Personality: He has a dark personality, and tends to stay away from people as much as possible. However anyone who does talk to him knows two things. One: He’s surprisingly kind. Two: He isn't very smart unless he’s fighting. Despite being dumb he never gets confused and knows whats going on.

Strength:  He’s strong in ranged and stealthy situations. He isn't sloppy in a fight face to face either.

Weakness: In any social event from talking to blending in with a crowd. Also mid ranged battles where he can't get close enough to use his melee and not far enough away to aim properly.
Semblance: He can remove his presence and soften his movements so unless somebody sees him, they will have no idea he is there.


Name: Duce

Primary Form: Aces weapon is a black and chrome colored bow that shoots dust made arrows so they regenerate in his hand when he touches the bow string. The bow is a compound bow with a strong pullback (thus a strong shot). The bow also has a precision ACOG scope attached.

Secondary Form: The bow can retract into smaller form to be put on his belt and he has two double sided jagged daggers that he hides in his jacket.

Tertiary Form: Other than the bow being able to get smaller and denser.

History: The bow was created by one of the thieves and him when he was 8. Surprisingly even without education he is a great mechanic. The thieves acquired a good amount of dust due to their, you know THIEVING. They developed a way to chemically turn dust into pure energy but also a physical object. Once made into an object, if the dust hits another object at 2 meters per second or above it will explode and regenerate back into wherever the energy source is, which in the bow, is in the string.

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PostSubject: Re: Ace Rone   Fri Apr 18, 2014 9:23 pm

Before I review this character, I'm going to tell you to either space out your sections, or just copy and paste the character template code from the character template page, then fill in all your information. It makes it easier for the Modmins and the approval team to read.
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PostSubject: Re: Ace Rone   Mon Apr 21, 2014 9:15 pm

It feels way too short in a lot of areas for me to really feel comfortable approving. Strengths, weaknesses, and semblance specifically need more information before I would feel a potential approval being appropriate.
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PostSubject: Re: Ace Rone   Mon Apr 28, 2014 12:20 pm

Moved to MIA.
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