Hitori Iga

CHARACTER
Name: Hitori Iga

Age: 16

Gender: female

Species:faunus

Symbol: 　忍

Occupation: Student

Appearance: 5ft 9in, 150lbs, orange hair with black streaks kept in a french braid then rolled in to a bun helded in place by hair sticks , intense green eyes with feline pupils, muscular build like a female  track star and a small bust size.  Hands are large for a female and callused with finger nails that are naturally  black in color.    

History: Hitori was found in a mountain village to normal human parents.  They were alarmed by her part tiger appearance. Most villagers abhorred her presents and she was constantly teased and abused her.  At age six  her adopted grandfather took her in to his home high in the mountains.  Unlike the neighbors in her formal village, Hitori's grandfather praised her tiger like appearance, calling her his little tiger devil, and trained her in way of the shadow warrior.  She learned the arts of awareness , stealth, , ambush and skirmish. He also taught her the nine weapons of the shadow warrior, short sword, pole arm, throwing blades, chains weapons, empty hand, iron knuckles, dust weapons,  dagger,  hand cannon. Seeing a need for Hitori to become socialized her grandfather sent her to Beacon using some contacts in the school to grant her admittance base on her homeschool training.  

Personality: Hitori is quite but not to shy.  She listens intently grazing into the speakers eyes until she feel it is the perfect moment to join the conversation.  She approaches most situations the same way. Waiting and carefully studying  until it's time to strike.  Hitori is an obsessive planner , always thinking carefully and believes everything has a time and a place . As a late bloomer Hitori is only beginning to feel romantic desires.

Strengths:  Planning ,  athletics, studies

Weaknesses: Social situations,  unorganized people or situations. Also she doesn't speak the common language of vale fluently so her speech comes of  wooden or stiff.   She struggles to understand sarcasm or subtext.  

Semblance:Active camouflage , Hitori can blend into any background either to better hide or to make herself harder to hit.

WEAPON

Name: BeDeviler

Primary Form:  Short Sword

Secondary Form: Sword Scabbard uses dust to produce gouts of flame, smoke, or flash of light.

Tertiary Form: Sword Scabbard can ejected a weighted chain to strike or trap opponents

History:Hitori built the BeDeviler based on a some old shadow warrior scrolls with some modern tweaks. Hitori believes that one should have the right tool for the right job.  The BeDeviler allows her to have many tools at her disposal.

I would say that a greater level of detail overall would be highly beneficial for this profile. As it is, it seems more for describing an NPC, or at worst, an archetype, rather than a full character. Give them full, complex personalities, give us a history that shows us how they came to be who they are, and so on and so forth. Don't just gloss over things, make it rich, and interesting. Make it so we'll want to keep reading more, and have us looking forward to seeing the character in action.

Wei Tzu wrote:

I would say that a greater level of detail overall would be highly beneficial for this profile. As it is, it seems more for describing an NPC, or at worst, an archetype, rather than a full character. Give them full, complex personalities, give us a history that shows us how they came to be who they are, and so on and so forth. Don't just gloss over things, make it rich, and interesting. Make it so we'll want to keep reading more, and have us looking forward to seeing the character in action.

Thank you I will think about it some more and improve it. Thanks for the advice.

Moved to MIA 04-27-14