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PostSubject: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeSat Apr 05, 2014 10:07 am

Name: Quenstedite "Quen" Fenrir

Age: 19, 7th day of the 7th month

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Symbol: A Golden Royal Crown on a Silver Shield

Occupation: Beacon, 3rd year student

Appearance:  6'4, 200 lbs, Muscular physique, Silver eyes, with a native american tan.
He wears Black baggy pants, white bandages rising from his shorts to just below his chest, and a black sleeveless trench coat with white lining and a royal crown on the back. He's got a serious demeanor on a square toned face with a scar over his right eye from his extensive training. His muscular physique and height make him stick out like a sore thumb in crowds. He constantly appears to be in focus, although that's just how he looks.

History:
At a young age Quenstedite was raised by his parents who were both hunter and huntress, to always be prepared and ready to lead those in need.
and even though he thanks his parents for all the training he wish's that they would have at least treated him like a son rather than a soldier.
They hardly ever showed him the maternal love that was seen in other families, instead of being warm and loving they were often cold, and calculating.
as a child, even when he was injured they would tell him to "tough it out" or that "pain builds character" he was tought to respect his seniors, and follow orders,
as well as to dish out order when order was needed.
as much as he loved and respected his parents he resented the neglect that they displayed towards what a true family should be, and he does his best to portray a
friendlier more understanding kind of leadership as opposed to his parents cold military demeanor.
his parents had sent him to Signal academy where he not only graduated early but also among the top ranking of his class. Though his parents still didn't seem impressed.

However, under the guise of a graduation celebration his parents decided to take him out on a hunting trip.
They go hunting for a Deathstalker, Shortly after locating the monster, Quenstedite felt that something was a miss, his parents were nowhere to be found and he soon realized that this was another test for him,
this was his parents own cold test for him to prove his worth as the spawn of two high ranking hunters.
Nodding to himself with understanding, He scans the perimeter, stalking the beast to a more open location.

Once the monster is out in the open, Quenstedite had then made his move attacking using the bow form of the King's guard, piercing its tail to the ground,
he then swiftly morphs the Kings Guard into it's Dual Blade mode rapidly striking the deathstalker's right pincer with as much force as he can muster.
the creature brushes him off and knocks him back, freeing its tail and goes for an attack with its stinger. Thinking quickly in the heat of the battle, Quenstedite had then detached his blades using his wired blades for mid range combat deflecting the stinger off of it's course as sending it to the ground.
He retracts the blades and returns his weapon back to it's primary Spike Gauntlet form and punches the joint that attaches the stinger to the tail breaking it off. As the monster screeches in pain Quenstedite uses his bow to then strike its eyes repeatedly, blinding it and then goes back to gauntlet mode, Punching it in it's disgusting maws savagely beating it to a pulp. He then uses his aura which covers his fists with what appear to be scale like armor, his eyes take on a  beastly yellow color and he finishes the monster off. Before losing himself to the  thrill of bloodlust in battle. He reverts back to normal and and takes a deep breath. His parents then came from out of the wood's. still showing little to no emotion, but then his mother shows the faintest of smiles which is more than he had seen in his life, his father with his arms crossed looks at his son, his words "You've improved over the years, keep up the good work." these words had made Quenstedite so happy he couldn't help but give in to a big smile as he bowed. Thus began his transition from Signal to Beacon.

Personality: He's generally a very jolly individual, he likes to show off his skill and spar with those he see's as worthy opponents. He's a bit of a womanizer though his form of flirting is unorthodox, as he's pretty oblivious when it comes to a female flirting with him, making him slightly awkward, but he makes up for it with chivalry and extreme politeness. In the midst of any kind of combat, from sparring to actual battle, he sometimes takes things a bit too far. That trait he inherited from his father who took any kind of combat to the extreme.
Overall he loves making new friends and he enjoys any and all kinds of conversation as long as it's pleasant, polite, and even more so if it's over food and training regimens.

Likes: Food, animals, Friends, honor, loyalty, combat, and sparring.

Dislikes: People who look down on others, disloyalty, dishonor, bullies

Strengths: Quen is able to lift roughly 3x his own body weight, making him a devastating close range fighter, and his conditioning has allowed him to be able to withstand a number of large hits, such as being hit full force by a Death Stalker's claw, whereas most people would have to take a while to collect themselves, he just gets right back up., and hand to hand fighting style, he can dish out and take a pretty hard hit

Weaknesses: Due to his lack of armor, Quen is extremely susceptible to slashing and stabbing attacks, hence why he strongly prefers to fight most opponents "hand to hand". Quendestite knowingly sacrificed almost all his defense for the sake of maximum offense and mobility, as well as full use of his semblance. Quesntedite trusts people way too easily, he was once told that bathing regularly was bad for the skin, after months of not bathing his father was forced to make him sleep outside until he was hosed down and cleaned off. , is as stubborn as an Boarbatusk, not The sharpest fish in the sky, he's a bit sluggish and he lacks in agility.

Semblance:  
Berzerker's Rage:
Fueled by the thrill of battle and activated by the pressure's of life threatening situations, The user lets out a near animistic roar and his aura covers his fists with what appear to be scale like armor, and his eyes take on a  beastly yellow color. This enhances his strength, defense, and as well as speed, but it doesn't come without consequence. The user is overcome with extreme bloodlust and the desire to fight is increased. In order to remain focused on the task at hand it takes lots of training, meditation, and a calm mind to keep control over this ability making Quenstedite unable to utilize it for more than 5 minutes at a time, and physically draining him to where he needs at least 3 minutes of rest after use If this ability is used for too long Quendestite loses control of himself and can no longer tell friend from foe, at this point he needs to either burn himself out or be subdued by his fellow teammates, leaving him worn out, vulnerable, and in need of rest for a few hours afterwards.

WEAPON

Name: Royal Guards:
   Custom built silver spiked knuckle gauntlets with a retractable blade on each arm serving both offensive and defensive purposes, with a black royal crest engraved
on the top of the hand, and grape vine like engravings lining the hands and the blade. While the blades are retracted the gauntlets seem like regular old decorative
gauntlets, though by balling his fists and flicking them downwards, double edged blades pop out providing extra reach and coverage for close combat.
 

Primary Form: King's Knight
Around the wrist of the gauntlets are special weighted shock enhancers for added impact force in hand to hand combat, they can also be used while the blades are out for extra piercing strength although he prefers to use it in regular hand to hand combat style since blades wouldn't be "fair" an opponent who uses only his fists.

Secondary Form: Queen's Guards
By balling his fists tightly and swinging his arms downward, Quen's gauntlets release a double edged blade roughly the length of his forearm. This provides him with slashing and stabbing capabilities along with a slight range advantage during combat. The blades can also be separated from the gauntlets attached by a special durable
stress resistant metallic wire, when released they have short handles for the wielder to grip and throw them.
The blades are weighted to Quen's's exact preferences to maximize balance, force, accuracy and the overall efficiancy of the blades when swung around. They can utilize red dust for an explosive impact and the light blue dust for an ice wave impact during combat but only in this form.

Tertiary Form: Royal Guard Archer
Aside from the blades, the left gauntlet had a bow attachment that splits open from the side and allows Quen to fire arrows at enemies that are at a distance, the arrows can also utilize Red Dust for an explosive impact shot for long range combat. The bow shoots with an effective accuracy and killing range of 60 Yards, 90 yards when the bow itself uses white dust for added propulsion of the arrow, however using the white dust on the bow while firing an arrow with red dust will backfire and yield catastrophic results. if the target is any farther than 60 yards, 90 with white dust, and the accuracy of the shot is greatly reduced and the arrows will usually only wound assuming they hit at all.


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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeSat Apr 05, 2014 9:55 pm

To start off, I would like to see more added to the appearance section, such as facial structure, muscle mass, eye color, and etc.

As for the strengths and weaknesses. I'd like to see them fleshed out more, not just lists.

For the semblance I would like to see an estimated amount of time that he can berserk, or some other form of weakness. And is the semblance activated by something? If so list it.

Last of all, the weapon section should have titles stating the different forms and such (Refer to the Character Template if needed). And there are some minor capitalization errors throughout.
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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeTue Apr 08, 2014 2:25 pm

Alright, I think i just about covered everything you asked for thanks for the heads up
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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeSat Apr 12, 2014 9:31 pm

Alright, most of the stuff looks good.

Just add a little more to the strengths and weaknesses. Such as, how defensive is he? About how strong is he? Specify a bit more please.
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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeMon Apr 14, 2014 1:16 am

Okay i made some adjustments to the strength and weaknesses tell me what you think.
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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeMon Apr 14, 2014 7:39 am

Looks good to me, +1 Approval!
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PostSubject: Re: Quenstedite   Quenstedite Icon_minitimeMon Apr 14, 2014 10:55 am

Works for me 2/2 and moved.
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