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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:36 pm

Good post, but I'm a little confused about your characters apparent ability to "loose control and go blood thirsty." I thought that he didn't like fighting. I also don't see how that is a weakness. It's not a good thing for sure, but not really a weakness.
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:14 pm

That makes sense but I still don't see how that is a weakness. You compare it to Yang's red eyes, which seem to make her stronger.
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:43 pm

It's fine take your time Razz. Also, one thing that i forgot to mention is that you say that you are able to cut weapons in two. While this is fine for a description, I'm sure that anyone wouldn't be very pleased with you cutting there weapon in half in an actual role play scenario. Please don't do this.
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:00 pm

That's fine. Once you edit the strengths and weaknesses you're good to go my friend!
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:10 pm

I was hoping for something along different lines. If you insist on having the Beserk thing as your weakness, could you put any negative effects from experiencing it, e.g., physical exhaustion, harmful to his body, unable to use aura due his inability to focus and concentrate properly. Stuff like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:20 pm

There we go! Accepted!
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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shem Drakur   Tue Feb 25, 2014 1:32 am

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