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Shemskis
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Subject: Adhira Raiju Mon Mar 03, 2014 12:07 am
Name: Adhira Raiju
Age: 18
Gender: Female wolf faunus
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Occupation: 1st year Beacon Academy Student
Appearance: Two pointy white wolf ears come out of the long white hair going down her back with it tied together at the back of her head and spreading out as the hair extends. Sharp yellow eyes appear under the white bangs of her hair. She doesnt wear much armor. Her top is dark gray/black with yellow lining covering her medium bust. Her stomach is covered only by a small yellow sash used to hold up her weapon. She wears short black shorts with yellow designs on the trim with a small bushy wolf tail coming from the back. Her legs are covered mostly by her long, thigh high leggings which open wide at the thigh. She usually doesnt wear shoes in battle as they are still covered by the leggings and yellow straps but she sometimes wears white sandals. Her arms are bare minus a few bandages and a silver bangle on her right arm. Her hands are covered in black gloves with yellow trim/designs. On her waist is a small drum. It is a keepsake from her brother who died/disappeared.
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History: Adhira grew up an orphan, never knowing her mother and father, her only friend and playmate was her twin brother, Tyrell. Upon reaching the age of 8, the Storm Twins, they were dubbed, were taken in by a family of martial artists who then became their trainers and foster parents. Seeing such skill in the two, they were sent off to Sanctum Academy to become hunters. During their time at Sanctum, they were encountered by a ferocious pack of Beowolves on a trip to the forest of forever fall. The chaperones fought off them valiantly to protect the young students but soon discovered that one was missing...Tyrell. Searching for days, Tyrell was never found, except for a small silver bangle with a carving of a red tiger and Tyrell's symbol- a storm cloud with soundwaves coming from it. Not believing the teachers looked hard enough, Adhira shut herself in, not trusting the teachers anymore and trained harder just to escape the school and her pain. Graduating quickly, she rushed off to Beacon Academy to become a better huntress to find her brother....or to kill the beowolves that took him away.
Personality: Other than acting tough and somewhat of a bully, she is usually distant from people, due to lack of trust in them. She is afraid of connecting with people and will only open up to a few close friends if some get to that stage in fear of losing them again like her brother. She gets very quiet at the mention of her past and tends to change the subject quickly if it is mentioned. She can be silly and cute at times but tends to try to keep an image of a leader/mean girl.
Strength: She is quicker than normal people as well as has excellent hearing and night vision due to her faunus traits. Her semblence makes her practically immune to electric attacks. Has excellent strength to be able to swing and throw her main weapon.
Weakness: Lacks armor. Vulnerable to many forms of attacks specifically slashing attacks and other forms of dust attacks that isnt electricity. Her weapons are mostly used long range and has to retrieve them to get them. Her semblence can backfire if she is in anything conductable, i.e. water. Her main weapon, Dynamo is a large oversized ninja star, which make it hard to swing around if needed to be used at close range.
Semblance: Lightning Manipulation/Creation- Using her aura, she can super charge her body with the static electricity a body makes combined with the charges and pulses the heart makes to generate a stronger electric bolt and then charge it to a power that so it can arc from her hands in a single shock. With her ability as well, any electrical attack can be redirected by her back to the opponent or out of the way. She can not hold the power too long as it will stop her heart or fry her insides. She mostly uses it to charge her weapons with electricity for added effect. If she is wet or standing in water, the lightning will not only attack her opponent but will cause a current through the water and shocking her as well.
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WEAPON
Name: Dynamo and Volts
Dynamo: A large throwing star with yellow designs on it that reacts when charged with electricity due to Adhira's semblence. When charged with electricity, it's attack becomes stronger and when colliding with a solid object, it releases the electricity stored in it in a minature shockwave. Mostly used for throwing or a sheild, it can also be used as a somewhat close range weapon if needed.
Volts: 5 throwing knives/kunai that also have glowing yellow designs that react to the electricity given to it. They have miniature coils at the handle ends for electricity to arc from knife to knife when thrown on the ground in a pattern to make a small electric fence or a trap.
History: Adhira recieved Dynamo from her foster father, a master at using large shurikens. She upgraded it at Sanctum along with making her throwing knives to carry her semblence abilities.
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SentientSnake Moderator
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Subject: Re: Adhira Raiju Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:53 pm
I'd like to see more in both the strengths and weaknesses sections, maybe some more clarity on what specific forms of attacking she's vulnerable to.
I'm not going to withhold my approval for this, as RWBY is practically about ridiculous weapons, but holy over sized throwing star O_O If it's the same size as in that picture, she'd have to be pretty strong to lug that huge thing around, or her attacks would be pretty slow.
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Shemskis
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Subject: Re: Adhira Raiju Tue Mar 04, 2014 4:20 pm
added more to the strengths and weaknesses :3
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Subject: Re: Adhira Raiju Tue Mar 04, 2014 6:39 pm
Approved +1!
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Subject: Re: Adhira Raiju Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:43 pm