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 Corbenik Yoshimira

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PostSubject: Re: Corbenik Yoshimira   Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:38 pm

The strength and weakness sections are both a bit lacking. Flesh those out a bit more and you should be good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: Corbenik Yoshimira   Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:40 pm

Looks good. +1

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PostSubject: Re: Corbenik Yoshimira   Mon Feb 17, 2014 2:36 am

Looks good to me.

2 of 2. Moved.

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