Kai Brandt

CHARACTER

Name:
Kai Brandt
Age:
18
Gender:
Female
Symbol:
TBD
Appearance:
Kai is a fairly small girl, but she is strong despite her size. She has long, straight black hair that hangs down to her lower back, as well as bright orange eyes that have slitted pupils. Around her neck, she wears a small silver pendant of a scale, the symbol of the Kyronic Order. She also sports a pair of wolf-like ears sticking up from her head. She wears scaled armour covering her torso and chest, with light plate protecting her arms. Her armour is dark grey with white flame-like designs crawling along her arms and torso. She wears a grey combat dress underneath her armour, along with light greaves to protect her lower legs.
Personality:
Kai is a relatively friendly person, but she has a short fuse due to the discrimination she faced as a child. Even though she becomes angry easily, she cools down quickly as well, and it is difficult for her to hold a grudge for too long. She is fiercely independent, but she sees the value in the work her Order does. The only person she takes orders from is her Headmaster, but she isn’t a leader by any stretch of the imagination.
History:
Kai was born into a poor faunus family in the slums of Vale. She was the only child, and when she was only four, her parents were killed by a racist mob, and she was handed over to a caretaker in the Kyronic Order. She was raised by the Order and trained to be a fighter, however, she faced much discrimination within the Order due to anti-faunus sentiments left over from the Battle of Fort Arghon. Nevertheless, she persevered, becoming an adept fighter and proving herself. She was even victorious in one of the Order’s biannual tournaments, earning her the right to choose a weapon from the Order’s Vault. The weapon she chose was Uriel’s Wrath, a weapon wielded by a former Headmaster of the Order. When she was 17, she was sent on a mission to Vale to infiltrate Beacon to assess the military capabilities of the school. There were concerns within the Order that the school for huntsmen was becoming too influential and powerful, and there were suspicions about the intentions of the school. She has just reached Vale, and has been moved up to the equivalent of her third year at Beacon as a result of her fighting prowess.
Strength:
Kai was trained by the best teachers the Order had to offer to be a powerful weapon if she was ever needed. Her semblance was discovered at an early age when she had a fit of rage and nearly killed her teacher. She is tough, as well as strong, having been taught and conditioned by the Order.
Semblance
She has the ability to manipulate flames, and all she needs is a spark to be able to create a raging inferno.
Weakness:
Kai is not the quickest person, having to fight with a sizable weapon as well as armour weighing her down. She is good at swordplay, but she is easily outmaneuvered by a faster, more agile opponent. She is much better at fighting a single target 1v1 or 2v2, but when facing a swarm of smaller enemies, she can be overwhelmed with relative ease.
WEAPON

Name:
Uriel’s Wrath
Primary Form:
A Zweihander. Fairly straightforward, a large, wide-bladed, two-handed sword that Kai uses in close combat. It closely resembles this blade and she is able to wield it with great ability, despite its size.
Secondary Form/Function:
The weapon also has a ranged functionality. It has a switch on the bottom of the blade that allows Kai to change it into a rifle of sorts. The blade splits in half and slides back, revealing a gun barrel. The halves of the blade then fold around Kai's arm, attaching the weapon to her. This makes it so that there is less threat of her dropping the weapon and being unarmed. The rifle functionality is semi-automatic and is reloaded by a 12-round box magazine that is also hidden when it is in blade form. Kai carries several of these magazines around, but prefers to fight in close combat.
History:
The blade was once owned by Headmaster Uriel of the Kyronic Order. Uriel was an expert Hunter, and was rumored to have taken down an Ursa Major and a Deathstalker single-handedly. When he died, his weapon was stored in the Order’s Vault, where it would rest for a number of years before being won by Kai in one of the Order’s tournaments.

All I'd prefer is the separation of Semblance from strengths, but otherwise looks good.

I have PMed you with potentially plot sensitive questions regarding your character.

Edits made accordingly

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Added a tidbit to appearence