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PostSubject: Stahl Ehren   Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:01 pm

Name: Stahl Ehren

Age: 17, Seventh day of the third month. Born at 11:30.

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Symbol: A series of lines that form a circle, creating the appearance of coiling winds.

Appearance:  Stahl has chin length dark brown hair that reels back and has dark blue eyes. He stands at five feet eight inches and weighs 115 Lbs. He wears a long brown coat with a hood, with fur around the neck. It has a pauldron on the left shoulder, which, in turn, sports his family emblem.  

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Personality: Stahl has a fairly normal personality with a somewhat dry and sarcastic “been there, done that” sense of humor. He has a sense of honor and kindness, and this, more often then not, gets him into trouble when dealing with less then savory types. Stahl does have a strong sense of determination and fair play, it is his greatest strength, and at the same time, it’s his greatest weakness. He enjoys a fair fight, and will allow an opponent to recover if they are stunned or incapacitated, even if that means getting bit in the ass for it.

History:  Stahl’s family, unsurprisingly, has a long and bloody history with the Grim. He lost his father to them, and his own father lost his brother to them. However, Stahl has grown up without him and has turned out all right. All things considered, he’s had time to mourn and moved on. Though it’s still a sore subject from time to time. He aims to become a Hunter to support his family with his earnings.

Strength: Stahl has a modestly strong Aura, though he uses it support his more passive abilities, like strength, speed, etc. Even without it though, he has a good grasp of tactics and strategy, though Stahl prefers an honest to god fight over anything sneaky. His swordplay is based on high-speed strikes and martial arts, preferring to hold his sword in reverse grip, despite the lack of range. Stahl’s best trait is his versatility and adaptability; quickly able to recognize a change in the environment or situation, he can adapt and work with it.

Weakness: While he does have a good Aura, he lacks precise control over it and can’t really do more then the basics with it. Stahl can also get over eager if victory is in sight. His arrogance can often work against him if the opponent knows how to work against it. While his versatility is his best physical trait, it’s also his weakest, as the ability to be proficient in all areas means lacking any specialization. If he faces an opponent whose stronger, he won’t be able to match, if the opponent is faster, Stahl can’t keep up, and so on and so on.

Semblance: Wind control. Stahl’s Semblance grants him minor control over the air and wind. Able to move the wind when running to move without resistance, or provide a gust of wind to allow for strong pushes.  Even creating razor sharp arcs from his sword. That being said, it’s not really made for direct combat and lacks any real offensive techniques aside from the wind slice, as it can be blocked by pretty much anything durable enough. Such as solid rock, iron, or Aura.

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Name: Eisen Blatt (Iron Leaf)

Primary Form:  A three foot single edged sword with a rifle handle making up the hilt, with a pressure trigger near the cross guard. Pushing it will activate the grenade launcher that lies on the blunt side of the blade. The launcher can fire off an kinetic based grenade which can be used for a short ranged rocket jump, though it lacks any actual explosive properties, being little more then rather violent push in weapon form. A rifle barrel is on the flat side of the blade, which, when fired, can increase the swinging power of the blade for an arc by using the recoil to increase the velocity of the blade or, if impaled in an enemy, repeat firing into whatever the blade is stabbed into at the moment. Though it can't actually be aimed due to the weight of the sword itself other then point blank shots.

Secondary Form/Function: With a circular motion, Eisen Blatt transforms into a semi auto battle rifle with a larger then normal bayonet on the side of the barrel. As the blade collapses into itself to make room for the gun parts to rearrange themselves, the grenade launcher also assumes its normal place on the gun, being directly underneath the barrel.  

History: Stahl’s weapon, which he based off his father’s and his uncle. Though with his own influences, such as the grenade launcher and the shape of the blade, ultimately though, it’s not anything Stahl is particularly attached too, and will not hesitate to loose it if necessary.


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PostSubject: Re: Stahl Ehren   Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:12 pm

Looks pretty good. I just have a few questions with the blade that you might need to add in.

Is your sword single edged or double edged sword, I'm guessing singled edged? In either case I don't fully understand the ballistic functions while in sword mode. Based on what I can understand though it appears to just be wording.

So correct me if I'm wrong but is grenade launcher not on the blade of the sword but rather on the hilt to be used for grenade jumping while the rifle barrel is on the dull side of this sword.

if that's right just make it more clear in the template.

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PostSubject: Re: Stahl Ehren   Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:58 pm

Congrats. you're good.

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PostSubject: Re: Stahl Ehren   Mon Apr 14, 2014 4:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Stahl Ehren   Tue Apr 15, 2014 7:31 pm

Changes made:

Age: 17, Seventh day of the third month. Born at 11:30.

Species: Human

Symbol: A series of lines that form a circle, creating the appearance of coiling winds.

Appearance: Stahl has chin length dark brown hair that reels back and has dark blue eyes. He stands at five feet eight inches and weighs 115 Lbs. He wears a long brown coat with a hood, with fur around the neck. It has a pauldron on the left shoulder, which, in turn, sports his family emblem.

Personality: Stahl has a fairly normal personality with a somewhat dry and sarcastic “been there, done that” sense of humor. He has a sense of honor and kindness, and this, more often then not, gets him into trouble when dealing with less then savory types. Stahl does have a strong sense of determination and fair play, it is his greatest strength, and at the same time, it’s his greatest weakness. He enjoys a fair fight, and will allow an opponent to recover if they are stunned or incapacitated, even if that means getting bit in the ass for it.

Strength: Stahl has a modestly strong Aura, though he uses it support his more passive abilities, like strength, speed, etc. Even without it though, he has a good grasp of tactics and strategy, though Stahl prefers an honest to god fight over anything sneaky. His swordplay is based on high-speed strikes and marital arts, preferring to hold his sword in reverse grip, despite the lack of range. Stahl’s best trait is his versatility and adaptability; quickly able to recognize a change in the environment or situation, he can adapt and work with it.

Weakness: While he does have a good Aura, he lacks precise control over it and can’t really do more then the basics with it. Stahl can also get over eager if victory is in sight. His arrogance can often work against him if the opponent knows how to work against it. While his versatility is his best physical trait, it’s also his weakest, as the ability to be proficient in all areas means lacking any specialization. If he faces an opponent whose stronger, he won’t be able to match, if the opponent is faster, Stahl can’t keep up, and so on and so on.

Semblance: Wind control. Stahl’s Semblance grants him minor control over the air and wind. Able to move the wind when running to move without resistance, or provide a gust of wind to allow for strong pushes. Even creating razor sharp arcs from his sword. That being said, it’s not really made for direct combat and lacks any real offensive techniques aside from the wind slice, as it can be blocked by pretty much anything durable enough. Such as solid rock, iron, or Aura.

History: Stahl’s weapon, which he based off his father’s and his uncle. Though with his own influences, such as the grenade launcher and the shape of the blade, ultimately though, it’s not anything Stahl is particularly attached too, and will not hesitate to loose it if necessary.

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