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PostSubject: Zwei Carter   Sat Sep 14, 2013 5:56 pm

CHARACTER

Name:Zwei Carter

Age:19

Gender:Male

Symbol: A smiley face with a mask on wearing a malicious grin. [Made after week 15, Sunday]

Appearance: Zwei stands at about 5'10" and is not too fat or thin. Zwei's Face is covered with many large scars and because of this wears a mask over his entire face with holes his bright blue eyes. The Mask itself is black and shows none of his facial features . Zwei's  wild brown hair is rarely visible under a black hoodie that he wears (hood up to hide whatever parts of his face were not hidden already). To finish it he wears plain jeans.

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Combat outfit [[Made after Week, 15 Sunday]]:
 

Personality: Zwei as a person is very unpredictable often changing attitudes in a split second to almost appearing like a completely different person. He will often keep a cheery carefree attitude assuming as this is the most dominant of his "attitudes" and usually be the personality you will see when you first meet him. Of course this cheery side isn’t his only side, as observed by fellow beacon students Zwei will quickly become serious or rude faster than you could blink. He is easily addicted to even the least addictive of substances and it shows in his apparent addiction to painkillers and being an alcoholic. His morals and ethics are about non-existent thievery and property damage are meaningless words to him and it is likely the school and his friends are the only thing reining him in. Zwei also appears to be prone to sudden violent outburts, luckily it is obvious when they are coming on so others can get away if they want to.

Semblance: Zwei is able to force his aura to come through his skin and manifest as a pitch-black “Smoke” or fog that behaves like normal smoke or fog. Zwei can rev up the production of this smoke to such a high level that he is able to create a smokescreen if given enough time, it doesn’t require much effort on his part to do this and is able to create the black smokescreen while fighting. Zwei is also able to focus where to smokescreen is created and with it being possible to prevent it from spreading too much, he is also to gather to screen in his hand and throw it like a baseball to create something similar to an impact-smoke grenade. Zwei is only able to use this semblance one per battle due to a  long cooldown on the semblance. Zwei is also affected by his own smoke to a degree and is only able to see the outline of his enemy while inside, not the scenery outside.

History:As a child Zwei was often bullied and made fun of by the other children. His parents did nothing about the bullying and told him to "deal with it  himself". Taking this "advice" Zwei began training himself how to fight. On his way home from school a drunkard went up to him and pulled him into an alley and slashed his face multiple times but thanks to Zwei learning to fight was able to run away before he was killed. The scars on Zwei's face only intensified the bullying and instead took to wearing a mask to hide himself from others.Zwei was accepted to Beacon when he was 18 and is now currently in his first year and has average to below average grades.

Strength: Zwei is a very versatile fighter and is able to suit himself to most combat situations by taking advantage of his opponent's and his environment.  His weapons are able to suit himself to most situations and prevent him from being fully ineffective in combat.

Weakness: Zwei's general combat style leaves him open to well-timed counter-attacks and if up against a dedicated "counter-attacker" he would have to change his style to a less natural feeling defensive style or have to keep himself at a range with his revolver.


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Name:Fortissimo

Primary Form: The main form of the weapon and the form it is normally carried around would be a short-sword with a deep black handle and guard that comes out in two prongs to catch an opponent's blade. In place of a third prong, Zwei's weapon has a small handle which can he held so that the weapon can he used in a similar fashion of a tonfa.  

Secondary Form/Function: The blade is able to change itself into a simple revolver with the regular six rounds. The revolver itself shares the same color scheme of the blade and is mostly black. The revolver is able to fire normal rounds like one would expect from a regular revolver, the gun is also able to fire dust rounds alongside regular bullets.

Weapon mod by Jet:  At the press of a button Fortissimo will extend into  tonfa mode and eject the blade from the hilt only with smaller handle  on the blade so it can still be swung around. When activated the tonfa uses electric dust and also leaves an electric trial behind it. The blade uses fire dust and also leaves a trail like the tonfa does.

History:Forged shortly after the slashing incident Zwei made it himself after being taught by the local blacksmith not much else is special about the blade. The tonfa function was added mainly to get revenge on drunkard without killing him (completely) but he still uses it for sparring due to his habit of going for vital areas with his blade or to end an argument. 

[Weapons below this were acquired Week 15 Sunday]

Name: Taifu

Primary Form:
Taifu is a staff with a blade attached on each end. While in this form, it functions as any other staff, with the exception that it can be used to create powerful localized wind storms. The blades can be retracted to make Taifu easier to carry.

Secondary Form/Function:
The blades are attached to chains which are stored in the hilt in the first form. However, the blades can be fired and retracted in a fashion similar to a harpoon. This function allows the weapon to also be used as both a zip-line and grappling hook.

History:
Taifu is a family heirloom passed down to the first-born son of the Kaze family. Due to Asher and Aaron being twins, their parents chose an alternate method of passing on the heirloom. Asher and Aaron do not know the method their parents used, but the decision has been the cause of some tension between them. After the death of Asher, the weapon was handed off to Roan Alma who was to pass the news along to Zwei, along with the news of Asher's death.

Name: Jishin

Primary Form: Two rods/sticks, similar to Eskrima sticks. Each rod is made of titanium, with tips on each end that produce electricity when they come in contact to their target. If two ends of opposite sticks are joined, they intertwine, releasing a small chain from with in to all the sticks to be used as a weapon similar to Nunchucks.

Secondary Form/Function: When plunged down into the earth, both rods send shock waves of electricity through the ground, shocking enemies and/or allowing Aaron to sense enemies that are connected to the ground.

History: After the family heirloom, Taifu, was given to his twin brother Asher, Aaron could not let his brother steal the spot light. After collecting the necessary materials, he was able to hand craft the basic design of the Jishin, a weapon he was sure to help he defeat his brother and make his family proud. Once he was accepted into Signal, he decided he needed to 'upgrade' his weapon to be on par with his brother's. At this time he added the electricity effect and a more efficient method of connecting the two rods to allow the use of them as nunchunks. After the death of Aaron along with Asher, along with Taifu, Jishin was entrusted to Roan Alma  to be given to Zwei.


Last edited by kellenredx on Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:24 pm; edited 21 times in total (Reason for editing : Just cleaning up a bit, more to come)
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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:07 am

Your details in most sections is a little slim. Not too bad anywhere except in the weapon. Add some flavor to the history and/or design or something.

Also, your character history could use a bit more. What did you do after the attack? Did you ever join a huntsman/huntress academy such as Signal? Did you apply to Beacon this year?

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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:08 pm

Thank you for the feedback I will fix it right away
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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:22 pm

Approved!

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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Sat Sep 28, 2013 11:26 pm

edits made regarding aura and anger-mode (idk what to call it)

But despite his personality even he gets angry.It is difficult to truly anger Zwei  but when you do he becomes a bloodthirsty killer with no fear. Zwei's aura also visually manifests in this mode growing stronger the angrier he is. His aura is pure white in contrast to the black we often wears and will often manifest as a bright light emanating from his body capable of nearly blinding people if he were to get angry enough

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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Mon Nov 11, 2013 11:13 pm

Pre-edit, 11/11/2013:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Tue Apr 08, 2014 10:49 am

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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Tue Apr 08, 2014 8:10 pm

Changes made:

-Added Taifu to weapons section
-Added Jishin to weapons section
-Clarified Fortissimo's description a little
-Made strengths and weaknesses more accurate
-Made it clear that Zwei has not has not discovered his semblance Added Zwei's semblance
-Added in his self-made symbol.
-Fixed general grammar and formatting errors
-Added Zwei's combat outfit
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PostSubject: Re: Zwei Carter   Sat Apr 19, 2014 12:23 am

Re-approved.

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